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Post by Ñc-Sï×Whëélz on Mar 21, 2010 2:25:50 GMT -5
I remember that on one of the old sites, poetry and raps were really big with some of the members like dmg. So post the poetry you have here!!
At the beginning of this year, my senior english teacher made the class write a love poem and read it in front of the class lol. So heres the first poem:
I'll love you during Summer sunshine, I'll love you during Winter days, I'll love you through the peaceful times, And you you still when skies are grey. My love for you will not bow to time, Nor fall short with you need me most. No, my love lasts till dying breath, When broken notes ring out, pour over my ears, And sing of death. No, my love will last through all, Till the end of days, Till my heard betrays, Forever and Always.
There ya go lol I started it out! And it doesnt have to necessarily have to be just poems, it could be random thoughts, or inspiring moments. Your turn.
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Post by Finz on Mar 21, 2010 3:51:43 GMT -5
Although your efforts are admirable I do believe it is misplaced. There is a place to talk in rhymes you find it near the singing thread My person does not like these things And, as now, when missplaced I have to start the day with a frown so no cheering up, ya frikkin clown
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Post by Ñc-Sï×Whëélz on Mar 21, 2010 23:44:18 GMT -5
I'm sorry good sir you must be mistaken A slot for poetry on this forum has not been taken. Perhaps I am blind, But mostlikely not. You see, Your worries can all rot. My thread is well placed, It is grand is it not? Now all we have to do it post poems, yes alot! Now it is time for you to leave, Let me show you to the door. I don't want to hear a peep. Not a word. Nothing more.
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Post by Finz on Mar 24, 2010 6:37:17 GMT -5
To be honest we are only two another contributor is nice but the question is who I wonder who the one is that will follow In our selfdweeping of missery and sorrow Now i must go and torture myself again in the loo coz that is what emo's and rhyming people do
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Post by Steph on Mar 25, 2010 1:35:20 GMT -5
I really like that finzollo, too six
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Post by Finz on Mar 25, 2010 4:57:36 GMT -5
I greet you my lady the fairest of them all But that was not a rhyme it didnt make me lol
So please be so bold and give us all you got dont care if you get trolled your poetry is hot
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Post by RÊÐ×)ÑÇ(×ßÔY on Mar 25, 2010 22:32:23 GMT -5
It's been years since I seen to her but her image still flickers in my head I think that I love her but my arm is not around her in my bed funny we told each other will always be there I guess that makes us liars it's like my heart is missing and in my soul there's the flyer but I won't look for you I have to much pride and I know you won't try so not every, but on some nights there may be a tear drop but we will not cry I like poetry I must admit lol
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Post by Ñc-Sï×Whëélz on Mar 25, 2010 22:59:56 GMT -5
Nice one man
While the universe spins, there is only us We are together from dawn till dusk Dreaming crazy dreams, on and on till we wreck it, but that's y I keep coming back. I wouldn't miss a second.
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Post by Rev on Mar 25, 2010 23:32:04 GMT -5
I wrote this back in high school... poetry class. it's basically about ruling the world and then destroying it lol i have much much more. May the wind rise, and the storm awake See the sky turn dark, clouds devour the sun No moon or starlight to guide you in the night Doomed to wander in dusk, grope in the shades Time for retribution Into nothingness I curse you all I challenge the Almighty, forger of the skies Above the ancient gods, I control the stars Sun rests on my shoulders, moon lies on my brows Over life and death, I have the power You shall kneel before me, quiver under my anger For I am your Majesty, Lord of the burning darkness Those who dread me not, blasphemous deceivers Fire will be your price, flames serve you right The universe in my hands Heavens collide before me I shatter the constellations Firmament shall fall down World perish in flames As I say one single word
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Post by Ñc-Sï×Whëélz on Mar 28, 2010 12:05:57 GMT -5
i like it. destroying stuff is always fun.
Love is pointless. All is through. But when I end this, I will still love you.
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Post by किक प& on Mar 28, 2010 14:31:02 GMT -5
Hypnotic (Experimental) Hypnotic I want exotic becoming haunted Instead of trippen, I'm slippin inside Paranoia playing within parody. Nervous reverse it, converted although not opened but was stolen, now we sleep like fishes in the ocean. Transparent please don't compare it, It's only meant to translate In-case we lose social function injunction Caution, sold my faith in an auction OH! the hypnosis this drug is causing.
Vision: Vanilla atmosphere surrounding my clean air I'll accept the challenge,I'm prepared. Sabotaged reality with my dreams Into the war, my drums beat Onward.. Nimble to the sound,they fell one by one onto the ground.
Sweater Sweet to us like ice creams We put our hands to the floor, to borrow Eventually only wanting for more. And In the summer, when it becomes warm we retreat to Antarctica Tasting for new flavors to extract Eruption flare onto our buds, and we wonder if we should run until we wake, Riddling between us, as the snow melts from the heat of my sweater.
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Post by Shippo on Mar 28, 2010 20:40:44 GMT -5
Family throwing knives at each others backs.. Friends laughing at all the things I lack.. The darkness follows close to attack.. I run and the trouble keeps right on track..
No where to hide where the laugh cant be heard.. Nothing spoken but evil words... Inner peace is brought by a small bird.. but something nice in hell..is just absurd.
Watch me when I sleep little bird Please protect me from the hurt I'll give you a hug when I wake Just please dont turn out to be a fake. You're all i'v got..your all I need To take me away so I wont bleed. So if you may...can you take me away.. to a better day?
The shadows lurk all around.. Shh I cant make a sound.. I thought I'd be ok..but.. I ended up being betrayed..
Peace and love are no more.. Hard to remember a life before.. The demons stalked outside my door.. Life twisted and turned..it got all black Weird things started to attack.. Now im trapped with just a bird No one even cares what occured..
Watch me when I sleep little bird Please protect me from the hurt I'll give you a hug when I wake Just please dont turn out to be a fake. You're all i'v got..your all I need To take me away so I wont bleed. So if you may...can you take me away.. to a better day?
Dont fly away and leave me be.. I'm trapped cant you see?.. The darkness never leaves.. My life..stolen by thieves.. Your the only light Dont fly away in the night..
Please come back little bird.. I promise you wont be heard.. I cant see without you.. You're all I know thats true.. Without you im alone.. All dark..and blown..
Watch me when I sleep little bird Please protect me from the hurt I'll give you a hug when I wake Just please dont turn out to be a fake. You're all i'v got..your all I need To take me away so I wont bleed. So if you may...can you take me away.. to a better day? ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Its really more of a song but I posted here anyway
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Post by Ñc-Sï×Whëélz on Mar 29, 2010 0:19:57 GMT -5
And will you stay with me when everyone has left? Or will you hate me still when all we see is death? I care for you still, why can't you see that? I need ur love, I need your breath, Why can't we go back? I wish I could live it again. I wish I could fix what I have done. But I know in the end that love is temporary. I will lose all I have, all iv won. There will be no more smiles, no love or passion We are done, I am lost. All I have are memories.
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Post by Shippo on Mar 29, 2010 0:58:02 GMT -5
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Post by Rev on Mar 29, 2010 1:08:28 GMT -5
A windstorm dropped a bird from the sky It fell to the ground and it's wings broke and died But when the time got by, back to sky it flied 'cause the wings healed in time and the bird was I
Time is the death and the healing Take your last breath, 'cause death is deceiving Time is the past, now and tomorrow Days fly so fast and it leaves me so hollow
A snowstorm blew inside a wolf's eyes And the frozen tears covered all the mountainsides But then the time got by and the wolf died And someday that wolf would be I
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Post by Finz on Mar 29, 2010 5:57:36 GMT -5
The monday has come again to start the evil week a week of pain and sorrow and people having fun
God i hate mondays
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Post by RÊÐ×)ÑÇ(×ßÔY on Mar 29, 2010 14:04:15 GMT -5
Blue pill, yellow pill, red pill for the boy ounce of weed, bag of speed all I need for the boy Henneys good, vodkas good, got the bottle for the boy peer pressures a mutha fukka gonna take the life of this lil boy.
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Post by Steph on Mar 29, 2010 22:52:43 GMT -5
sweetness eludes those who seek happiness stole from the meek those who can't fight for themselves sadness overcomes their lives drowning in a pool of grief evilness eludes those who seek
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Post by Ñc-Sï×Whëélz on Mar 29, 2010 23:05:47 GMT -5
Most Of my poems are sad And if that is so then it's my bad I'll try to do better, try to make you smile Beacuse everything we do in this life is worth while Its not often that we get to touch someone with words This effects us all, from city to town to burbs. We could all use a little more love, say one simple line. All we need to do is lighten up, give it time
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Post by Rev on Mar 30, 2010 3:00:15 GMT -5
Howl of a coyote wakes up a man, A haggard shadow in this wasted land. Vultures rise with the scorching sun. A dry wind blows in a silent town.
Some Whiskey to clear his head And some for the brothers who are dead. Another day, another chase, Vigilantes will meet their fate.
Saddle your steed We are riding tonight Be ready to kill Don't flee from a fight. Pillaging is in our blood, We bow to no one and no one at all!
Stone cold metal in his hand, Stirs wild rival of righteous man. Life of an outlaw; the gallows await. Until then they shall reign!
No border is too sacred To cross and to spill the cup of hatred. Days to come are still unveiled, Take whats yours, no time to bewail!
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Post by Ñc-Sï×Whëélz on Apr 1, 2010 23:41:47 GMT -5
This hit me a minute ago lol I think it's prob to best one iv done cept the first one I posted What is inspiration? Is it a book? A phrase? A temptation? What is it that throws us together yet rips us apart? Heal the deepest wounds yet can pierces the heart? It is love. I see love in every corner of history. It is the one thing that can bring both bliss and misery. It lifts us when we have passion for someone And throws us down when we have no one. It is the great divider and great uniter. With it the world is much brighter And makes the burdens a little bit lighter. It can take us to the furthest reaches of space But in an instant throw us back into our place. Find love and keep it. So the day of ur death you can honestly say "I have lived." Love is inspiration. Whatcha think?
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Post by Finz on Apr 2, 2010 10:50:49 GMT -5
The voices in my head are getting louder they always yell at me just when i was little people around me are getting more quiet they keep staring at me just when i was little My head is spinning like a merry go round I peed myself just when i was little
I wanna be big
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Post by Ñc-Sï×Whëélz on Apr 2, 2010 21:53:22 GMT -5
If I go crazy then will you still call me superman? If I'm alive and well then will you be there a holdin my hand?
Oh shit that's taken
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Post by Steph on Apr 3, 2010 15:39:00 GMT -5
OK rev that was an excellent poem I do hafta say as for the rest very goot!
Where the winter ends I lay my head Upon the drizzle embankment The coolness of the moss embraces me The smell of foliage encircles my brain Luring me deeper into the woods Drawing out my wild needs Shed the clothes and misdeeds Free of earthly possessions Free from sin Free to be released into the universe Free
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Post by Rev on Apr 3, 2010 15:52:57 GMT -5
Thanks a lot Dmg i appreciate it!. read my other ones if u missed them.
some people may not understand my poems but it's up to the reader to figure it out.
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